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Devil Reloaded, An FF, PART 4 UPDATED
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PART 1


A lady dressed in Royal Attire was sitting beside a river holding a new born baby in her hands. "My Son" she murmured & lovingly caressing her son. His small hands touched her face & gave a toothless smile. She failed to hold her tears any longer & they made their way out. She fed her milk to her son & he soon fell asleep in the comfort of his mother lap. She carefully looked at his handsome face & kissed his forehead. She wiped her tears & put her son in a basket. "What if he drown? What if any animal harm him? What if nobody noticed him? But I have no other way left to protect him. Maa Durga please save my son." She floated the basket in the river silently praying for his well being. Soon, the basket disappeared in the flow of water.


"Saptarshiiiii"

Vrinda Parekh woke up with a start. She fall asleep sitting in her arm chair while reading a book. She was sweating & breathing heavily. Mitali rushed inside. "What happened bua?"
"Saptarshi, where is he? " Vrinda asked frantically.
"Bua, bhaiya is in Kamalpura. He informed me from the station, you were taking rest, so bhaiya told me not to disturb you. He will call as soon as he reach his quarter. Now, you drink water. Definitely you saw some bad dreams right??"
"I don't know Mitali, everything was blurred. Plus I don't exactly remember. I just felt I lost my Saptarshi."
"No bua, it's only some bad dream. Nothing will happen to my bhaiya, He is the best."
"It is a mother intuition Mitali. I was against of his this Kamalpura posting. But no, he will never listen to me."
Vrinda got up & lighted a diya in front of Durga Maa idol & prayed for her son's safety. Mitali too joined with her.

Vrinda Parekh, wife of Nalin Parekh. Nalin is also the business Partner of her brother Aditya Singh. Nalin & Vrinda's only child Saptarshi never was in good terms with his father. The day, Saptarshi got the appointment letter of his IPS job, then happened a huge arguments between father & son. His father wanted him to join his business, in which Saptarshi was not at all interested from childhood. Vrinda tried to restrain. But the situation worsens, Nalin almost tried to slap her, but Saptarshi hold his hand & left the home with his mother. Vrinda also followed her son without any protest as she is also fed up with his abusive nature & when Nalin crossed all limits in front of their son, she was devastated. Mitali also left with them. She always lived with Vrinda & Saptarshi as her father Aditya never cares about her. May be because she is a girl or may be because her mother died giving birth to her. So, her father considers her as ominous.

Indrani was impatiently looking at her wrist watch while her driver trying to fix up their car. It's already started getting dark. She was looking tensed. How she will manage to reach Government Guest House with all her luggage?? Her driver already informed that they can't get any mechanics here. She certainly don't want to spend night in this jungle route. There was a village nearby, but reach there is almost impossible. Suddenly, she noticed a car is coming from distance. When the car came near, Indrani noticed it's a Police Vehicle. She & her driver rushed to stop the car.
Saptarshi was reading some important documents when the driver suddenly applied brakes. Before asking anything, he heard a knock on the window glass. Saptarshi rolled down the glass & his eyes struck at the girl standing outside. Beautiful face, Bright eyes, but there was a soothing feeling in her eyes, Indrani also froze at her place. Not a single words escaped from her lips. She was just looking at the man sitting in the car, Fair complexion, thin lips & a pair of lotus shaped intense dark eyes. Finally Saptarshi broke the trance. "Yes??"
Indrani also came out of her dreams." Sir, our car has broken down. Will you please give us lift to Govt. Guest House?"
Saptarshi- Yes sure, Please come in. ( & he looked at his driver)
The Old Police Driver smiled. "Here in Kamalpura, Govt Guest House is opposite side of your Quarter Sir."
Saptarshi ( with a smile)- See, our destination is same. Then there is no problem in going together.
Indrani's driver put her luggages in Saptarshi's car, when Indrani enquired what will he do now? The driver replied he know the shortcut route towards the village & he will spend night there.
Saptarshi & Indrani both looking at each other in the corner of their eyes.
Saptarshi- We met before??
Indrani- I don't think so.
Saptarshi- But... well, btw, I am Saptarshi Parekh. New ASP of Kamalpura.
Indrani- Indrani Reddy, Junior Research Associate of Archaeological Survey. Nice to meet you Sir & thanks for the help.
Saptarshi - Don't say Sir, It's give me feelings that I am getting old. Only Saptarshi & don't say thanks also, it's my duty to help you mam.
Indrani ( with a bright smile & twinkling eyes)- no mam please, gives me elderly feelings, Only Indrani.
Both smiled & shook hands. Suddenly Indrani sees blurred images of a trembling hand of a girl on the large hand of a man, A priest tied their hands together with a piece of clothes & flowers among the holy chanting of hymns." Indrani pulled out her hand from his. There was an uncomfortable silence in the car.
Saptarshi- By the way, you came alone here??
Indrani usually felt very disgusted about these kind of questions. Why can't a girl come alone. But to her surprise, she calmly answered, "My colleague Tarun will soon join me, he is struck with some other important work & I can't even wait to start my research."
Saptarshi- ohh Great, All the Best. But here is what to research??
Indrani- According to some old records, here in jungles have traces of some ancient kingdom.
Saptarshi- I think, you are doing your research without any official permission?
Indrani bites her lips. "Actually Yes. But it's my personal project. I am here in my own risk."
Saptarshi smiled. "This place is not safe. So, it is almost impossible to get official permissions. But Don't worry, just call me for any kind of help. It is my duty to protect you."



After refreshing himself & talking with a worried Vrinda, Saptarshi sat on the bed of his quarter spreading his legs. He was in pensive mood. He took a paper & wrote Kamalpura in between. He said to himself " people are getting killed in this place for years. Some also disappeared. We can assume that they are also dead. Definitely, it's a serial killing case. But then why there is no particular pattern? According to Criminal Psychology, Serial Killers disposed bodies in same manner. Plus, this is going on for years. What is the motive? Smuggling of costly trees & wild animals of forest? But there is no such reports. But this aspect can not be ruled out completely. Next, according to Indrani, here are traces of some ancient kingdom. Again, the smuggling angle is coming up. Some people trying to destroy our country's heritage. Smuggling business is one of the most important source of terrorist funding. And the attacks on villagers are may be to spread terror among people. Quite possible. But still, there are many confusions. Need to investigate the matter from the beginning. Demoness in 21st Century, what a joke." Saptarshi laughed & closed his eyes. Suddenly Indrani's face popped in front of his eyes. Startled Saptarshi opened his eyes."What's happening?? Why this nagging feeling that I know Indrani ? We have some connection & I feel I am attracted towards her. "He banged his head with his hand. "Saptarshi, Saptarshi, Stop, Stop, Love is not your cup of tea."


"Finally my wait is over. I can smell both of you. I increased my power so much that you both can't even stand in front of me. It's time for my revenge. No one can defeat me." In a dark cave, a woman opened her eyes.
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Madhu, hi, ill read this from next week, hopping to come back more active on shaanse
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(09-04-2018, 10:54 PM)Ronit Wrote: Madhu, hi, ill read this from next week, hopping to come back more active on shaanse

Sure. Will wait for your feedback. This is first time I am trying Fantasy genre. So, I am quite terrified about responses. Loads of Love.
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(10-04-2018, 07:13 PM)Madhumita Wrote:
(09-04-2018, 10:54 PM)Ronit Wrote: Madhu, hi, ill read this from next week, hopping to come back more active on shaanse

Sure. Will wait for your feedback. This is first time I am trying Fantasy genre. So, I am quite terrified about responses. Loads of Love.

i wish you all the best and i m sure you'll do justice to whatever you  going to write. 

site mein kuch issue aa gya payment ka i will solve it tomorrow and will start reading from tomorrw .
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hi, started reading, seeing the into, wah ahem sharma, he is cute no doubt you are his fan  Big Grin  

interesting prologue ...  indrani and tarun are   gonna search such old places and try to know what happened there, why people go missing and what makes that place so interesting. 

last part - Suddenly she can see a blur image of an ancient warrior on a horse with a lady, putting her arms around his shoulder.

is interesting is it about punar janam or something, 

also the missing people thing actually sounds adventure  story lets see

chapter 1 il read tomorrow, sorry for being slow, was so busy bringing shaanse back online
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(15-04-2018, 02:43 PM)Ron Wrote: hi, started reading, seeing the into, wah ahem sharma, he is cute no doubt you are his fan  Big Grin  

interesting prologue ...  indrani and tarun are   gonna search such old places and try to know what happened there, why people go missing and what makes that place so interesting. 

last part - Suddenly she can see a blur image of an ancient warrior on a horse with a lady, putting her arms around his shoulder.

is interesting is it about punar janam or something, 

also the missing people thing actually sounds adventure  story lets see

chapter 1 il read tomorrow, sorry for being slow, was so busy bringing shaanse back online

Yes, I am a fan of Aham Sharma. So, again, he is the HERO & also the same jodi.
Thanks for liking the prologue.
Indeed, the concept of the story is punar janam things aka "Reincarnation"
First time, I am trying fantasy genre, so, worried. Hope you all liked it.
Don't say sorry. It's okay. Take your time. Glad that Shaanse is back.
Loads of Love.
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PART 2


Princess Sandhya was riding her white mare. Cool breeze of morning soothing her face. It's her habit to watch sunrise daily & spend some time alone in the river side. A soft nicker from her horse, she realized they are nearing the river. A frown appeared on her face to sense she is not alone in the river side. After coming more closer, she found a man offering worship to sun from his posture. Though she is only seeing his back, but she can say He is a warrior from his well built figure & strong muscles. First ray of sun fall on him & she just watched the figure of that man with fascination. After completing his prayer, the man turned. She just bites her lips tightly. She felt a strange sensation in her whole body. Majestic face, swathed in an ethereal glow. Broad shoulders, trim waist & long, thick curly black shoulder length hair. There was a sign of rising sun on his forehead. Princess Sandhya noticed a strange look on his face after watching her. Without saying anything, he started moving.
Sandhya- Who are You? I am Princess Sandhya & I never saw you before.( in a proud tone, with her face held high)
The man bowed & greeted her.
The Man- Princess, I am Ranvijay, a warrior of your kingdom & you never saw me because I am new here.
"A mere soldier of her kingdom!!!!! How is this possible???" She felt her whole existence mocked her.


Indrani adjusted the lens of her DSLR camera to click the snaps of sunrise. In the East, the dawn had broke & a mixture of yellow & orange colour filled the sky. Soon, the sun started to conquer the darkness. Indrani noticed Saptarshi in his jogging suit running towards her.
Saptarshi- Good morning Indrani. ( with a bright smile).
Indrani- Morning Saptarshi.
Saptarshi- It's a pleasant surprise to see you here in the early morning.
Indrani- I am an early riser. Plus it's a nice way to start the day watching sunrise. Why you are here?
Saptarshi- ohh, I am here to maintain my six packs abs through exercise & jogging.
Indrani- ahh, what a big responsibility is on your shoulder ( laughing).
Saptarshi made a face.
Saptarshi- By the way, when you gonna to start your research work?
Indrani- Before going to jungle, I think, I need to talk with the local people here. Though whatever I heard on the way from the driver, I know, it will be the toughest job.
Saptarshi- Here all are afraid of Demoness right??
Indrani- hmm, By the way, Do your Department also believe in this Demoness??
Saptarshi- Don't know about others, at least I don't believe. I only believed in things which I see or based on enough proof & logic.
Indrani- same with me.
Saptarshi- But we can't ignore the fact that many people died of unnatural causes. We can say murder. So, you need to stay very careful. Always stay in contact with me. I want to crack the murder mysteries here.
Indrani- I too want to crack all the mysteries in jungle & to do research on the remains of that ancient kingdom.
Saptarshi- I think our way is similar. If we able to crack the mystery of jungle, than every problem will solve automatically.
Indrani- I am with You. ( & she forwarded her hand towards Saptarshi. He also joined hand with her.)
Today sun brings new hope for Kamalpura. Here begins a new story, or an old story is going to complete.


Saptarshi angrily banged his hand on the table. The old constable, Ramesh Bohra, was standing in front of him.
Ramesh- I know Sir, it's unbelieveable to you. But whole Kamalpura division believed the existence of demoness, even our Department. You think, why here in forest, there are no guards??
Saptarshi- Look, I know only one thing, Here people are dying & the reason is unknown. Some crimes definitely happening & as a Police Officer, it is my duty to find the culprits behind the murders.
Ramesh- Many Officers in the past tried the same thing, which you are saying. But that only led more destruction. You will only put your & innocent villagers lives in danger. Every year we do special puja in the temple on Amabasya tithi. Today is the special day. You are my Boss. So, I have to do what you say. But it is also my duty to warn you. In Kamalpura, we don't organize any occasion. The demoness can not tolerate happiness.
Ramesh saluted Saptarshi & left from his cabin. Saptarshi rolled his eyes. "Special Puja in Amabasya tithi. Hmm. Interesting. I will surely be present in today's puja."


Saptarshi stopped in front of the door in Indrani's room. She is arranging her things in her room & humming a tune. Saptarshi felt he heard the tune somewhere, though it is not from any Bollywood movies. Saptarshi knocked on her door. Indrani looked at him & told him to come inside.
Saptarshi- What tune you were humming?? I think, I somewhere heard the tune. Though it's not regular.
Indrani- I seriously not even remember what I was humming. Actually I was lost in my work. Not regular tune?? Then it must be some folk tune, I visited many places of India. So, may be...
Saptarshi- leave it. Nowadays, I am thinking too much.
Indrani- By the way, you came in my room?? Anything important??
Saptarshi- Today, here in local temple villagers organized some special Puja. Do you interested in going?
Indrani almost jumped. "Yes, Yes, I am very much interested. Just give me sometimes to get ready."
Saptarshi ( with a smile)- You seemed more interested than me.
Indrani- Why not?? By watching these, I can able to study their cultures. Hope You don't get bored accompanying a ASI, Research Associate.
Saptarshi- ohh no no, I am also interested in knowing these people. I will patiently hear what you say. But don't ask me any question related to History. Then, it may turn dangerous for me.( with a dramatic sad face.)



Phooli was playing an instrument Ravanhatta, sitting in the stairs of temple. She is a middle aged lady of Kamalpura. She has knowledge about many things. She is looking visibly pale. "Don't know what will happen tonight?? Maa Durga, Please Save us."
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(16-04-2018, 09:12 AM)Madhumita Wrote:
(15-04-2018, 02:43 PM)Ron Wrote: hi, started reading, seeing the into, wah ahem sharma, he is cute no doubt you are his fan  Big Grin  

interesting prologue ...  indrani and tarun are   gonna search such old places and try to know what happened there, why people go missing and what makes that place so interesting. 

last part - Suddenly she can see a blur image of an ancient warrior on a horse with a lady, putting her arms around his shoulder.

is interesting is it about punar janam or something, 

also the missing people thing actually sounds adventure  story lets see

chapter 1 il read tomorrow, sorry for being slow, was so busy bringing shaanse back online

Yes, I am a fan of Aham Sharma. So, again, he is the HERO & also the same jodi.
Thanks for liking the prologue.
Indeed, the concept of the story is punar janam things aka "Reincarnation"
First time, I am trying fantasy genre, so, worried. Hope you all liked it.
Don't say sorry. It's okay. Take your time. Glad that Shaanse is back.
Loads of Love.

oh same jodi , lo karlo baat i noticed the guy only  ;happy;  .. i like such stories i watch movies like that so stories would be fun to read. 

all the best, i m sure ull do it great.
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(16-04-2018, 10:00 AM)Ronit Wrote:
(16-04-2018, 09:12 AM)Madhumita Wrote:
(15-04-2018, 02:43 PM)Ron Wrote: hi, started reading, seeing the into, wah ahem sharma, he is cute no doubt you are his fan  Big Grin  

interesting prologue ...  indrani and tarun are   gonna search such old places and try to know what happened there, why people go missing and what makes that place so interesting. 

last part - Suddenly she can see a blur image of an ancient warrior on a horse with a lady, putting her arms around his shoulder.

is interesting is it about punar janam or something, 

also the missing people thing actually sounds adventure  story lets see

chapter 1 il read tomorrow, sorry for being slow, was so busy bringing shaanse back online

Yes, I am a fan of Aham Sharma. So, again, he is the HERO & also the same jodi.
Thanks for liking the prologue.
Indeed, the concept of the story is punar janam things aka "Reincarnation"
First time, I am trying fantasy genre, so, worried. Hope you all liked it.
Don't say sorry. It's okay. Take your time. Glad that Shaanse is back.
Loads of Love.

oh same jodi , lo karlo baat i noticed the guy only  ;happy;  .. i like such stories i watch movies like that so stories would be fun to read. 

all the best, i m sure ull do it great.

Ha ha. Yes. Same jodi too. I really hope you will like it, because somewhere I am not fully confident to try this genre Fantasy & the subject "Punar Janmo" "Reincarnation". Waiting for your reviews.
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