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Checkmate- Sam-Arj (Aham & Kashmira) FIC, PART 20 UPDATED on 23.4.2018
(05-04-2018, 10:43 AM)Rehan Wrote: part 12

it also happens to me that I wake up sometimes and forget where I am
These girls have a lot of demands, they want a husband to cook for them, and what will they do exactly?
Neil has discovered that they are now "together" interesting, he supports but does not so trust Sam's choice.

I do not know if it was worth telling Nell about Arjun's truth that sometimes friends can become enemies without knowing anything at all
Maybe he had told him deliberately? Maybe

At least Dev could not die.

in the end.. what is that code, what can it be.. ahm.

Thank You Rehan for your lovely feedback for PART 12. Thank You again that you took out your precious time to read "Checkmate".
Till now, you whatever read about Arjun, do you think Arjun is that much emotional guy to reveal his mission only to save Samaira's friendship with Neil?? May be he did it deliberately, may be he has something in his mind.
Let's see.
Keep reading to know more about that code.
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(05-04-2018, 06:09 PM)Madhumita Wrote:
(05-04-2018, 10:43 AM)Rehan Wrote: part  12

it also happens to me that I wake up sometimes and forget where I am
These girls have a lot of demands, they want a husband to cook for them, and what will they do exactly?
Neil has discovered that they are now "together" interesting, he supports but does not so trust Sam's choice.

I do not know if it was worth telling Nell about Arjun's truth that sometimes friends can become enemies without knowing anything at all
Maybe he had told him deliberately? Maybe

At least Dev could not die.

in the end.. what is that code, what can it be.. ahm.

Thank You Rehan for your lovely feedback for PART 12. Thank You again that you took out your precious time to read "Checkmate".
Till now, you whatever read about Arjun, do you think Arjun is that much emotional guy to reveal his mission only to save Samaira's friendship with Neil?? May be he did it deliberately, may be he has something in his mind.
Let's see.
Keep reading to know more about that code.

Yes.. I wonder too
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part 13 is interesting 
arjun is smart, bonnie is no less, they cracked the code, that's cool.

i wonder why arjun and bonnie came to A.D road with no backup police to catch all that people red handed?
how did that so called team lost that car  Confused 

arjun buy their story, i can not trust that story.

nice chapter
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(08-04-2018, 10:10 AM)Rehan Wrote: part 13 is interesting 
arjun is smart, bonnie is no less, they cracked the code, that's cool.

i wonder why arjun and bonnie came to A.D road with no backup police to catch all that people red handed?
how did that so called team lost that car  Confused 

arjun buy their story, i can not trust that story.

nice chapter

Thank You Rehan for your precious time & for reading & also for your lovely review.
Glad that you liked.
They are not alone in A.D Road. Rajat was there & also other Officers. They caught the bikers. They have no idea what will going to happen in A.D Road from the code. They took necessary steps. But unfortunately Bonnie lost the track of the car in jungle in darkness. It happens.
Still, let's see what happens next. Keep reading & Thanks again.
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(05-04-2018, 05:55 PM)Madhumita Wrote:
(03-04-2018, 08:51 AM)Vishnu Wrote: Part 5 padhne ke baad .. yeh arjun kon hai kya karne ke irade hai in janab ke, yeh koi esa wesa accountant nahi wo to kuch aur hi hai kya hai wo nahi pata. arjun aur bonney kyon khana industries ke peeche pade hai samajh nai ata yeh arjun kya cheez ha
koi bhi kam karne ke liye aa rah ha aur kisi ko pata nahi wo kya ha. bohut khatra hai naye workers rakhne ko, ending mein to usne disk se copy bhi liya aur dev ko behosh kar diya, yeh arjun kya cheez hai bhahhiya. samajh na ae

Thank you Vishnu for your precious time. Thank You for reading & also your inspiring feedback.
Ha ha. Arjun chiz kya hai yeh janne ke liye padhte rahiye Vishnu ji.
umeed hai anth main aapko saare sawal ka jawab mil jayega.

Jee zarur
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(05-04-2018, 05:57 PM)Madhumita Wrote:
(03-04-2018, 08:54 AM)Vishnu Wrote: meri puri koshish ha ke main padhu jitna padh saku,

sub agay hay me akela peeche hun per kosish karungaa ke sub ke speed mein aa jau

Koi baat nahin. Sab aage hai toh kya hua? aap aapne speed se pariye & also I can understand Time is an important factor.
I will wait for your reviews.

Jee bilkul
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part 6 padh ke yeh kehna chahunga, ke itni security hone ke bwajud bhi arjun ne dev ke computer ko hack kiya us ko behosh kiya aur itna kuch kiya ke kisi ko pata nahi laga

ek pitaah jo puri life aapse nafrat kare achanak se aapko pyaar de, dall mein kuch kala hai bhai, wo ladki apne pitaah ke pyaar ke liye taras rehi hai wo ye yaqeen kar gayee par samrat khana jo apni beti se baat bhi nai kiya care nahi kiya wo achanak aek din pyaar dena shuru kare .. na mumkin
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aagaya part 7 jo ki interesting lag raha hai

arjun aur samaira ki dosti, achi baat hai woh ahcnak us ko bulaa ker ke det pe le jata hai achi bat hai, samara bhi hairan ke yeh arjun ka kessa roop hai, samaira ko yeh roop bhi psand aya hoga isliye to poocha ke shadi karo lo mujhse . pyaari meeting rahi.

arjun office me tha achanak se nikal gaya office se aur gun kkyon nikal diya.. lagta hai aaj aek aur padhna padegaa.
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part  8  

arjun bohut smart ha wo kaise jaan gaya ke ladki ke jaan ko khatra hai wo turant aa gaya bachanae, wha bhai. hero wali entry uski shuru se hui hai bada intresting part hai

arjun aik inspector hai waaahhh yeh me socha bhi nahi tha, ke woh koi khas kam se aya hai, kya uski dosti jhoot hai yaan sahi me usko pasand karne laga

samaira ka rona wo bardash nahi kar sakta, jo samaira ke sath hua wo kisi ke sath na ho shukar ha wo use bachane agaya juldi se par aab kya karegi samara

aaj ke liye itna hi.. 
madhu jee bouht ache  part rahe hai mein to 3 padh paya, dheere dheere hi sahi sub ke speed me aa jaungaa. 
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(12-04-2018, 01:27 PM)Vishnu Wrote: part 6 padh ke yeh kehna chahunga, ke itni security hone ke bwajud bhi arjun ne dev ke computer ko hack kiya us ko behosh kiya aur itna kuch kiya ke kisi ko pata nahi laga

ek pitaah jo puri life aapse nafrat kare achanak se aapko pyaar de, dall mein kuch kala hai bhai, wo ladki apne pitaah ke pyaar ke liye taras rehi hai wo ye yaqeen kar gayee par samrat khana jo apni beti se baat bhi nai kiya care nahi kiya wo achanak aek din pyaar dena shuru kare .. na mumkin

Thank You Vishnu for taking out your precious time for reading Checkmate & also for your lovely feedback.
Yes, Arjun did it.
Yes, Samrat Khanna is not at all trustworthy. His activities are indeed suspicious. Arjun has full doubt. But Samaira ko kaun samjhaye woh to aapni dil ki sun rahi hai.
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