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Checkmate- Sam-Arj (Aham & Kashmira) FIC, PART 11 UPDATED on 16.3.2018
aab madhu b vip ban gyee Smile
(13-03-2018, 11:07 PM)Shaina Wrote:
(09-03-2018, 07:16 PM)Madhumita Wrote:
(09-03-2018, 01:25 AM)Shaina Wrote: Someone is reaching new heights of popularity!!!! Laugh

Of course Shai. You are on the height of Popularity in this Forums. VIP is showing in your Profile. I just joined & trying to get some readers for "Checkmate".

I was talking about you!!!!! Clapping
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Ahan, Part 1 of Chapter 8 is actually interesting and make you think, maybe yes her life is in danger and as was written here by someone that he might look like danger for her but he is trying to save her life, makes you think like he is not here to harm her. 

So he is the boss, has office, has mission
lets' see what happens next.
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Ahan.. part 2 chapter 8 -

Interesting progress, arjun is smart no doubt, gave 1000 rs to the waiter so can get the info, followed their car, found their car, interesting really .. lets hope samaira is safe not drunk or given drugs, uh scary movement...reading ahead.
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part 3 of chapter 8 -

one thing - what arjun said - the man who breaks her trust should get punch on his face, so dev did get a punch on his face.
samaira trusting people so easily, go out with them lead her to problems, she felt she can trust strangers easily, its like a chess game, you can win or you can lose, she did trust dev that's why went to eat with him, he gave her something in drink or in food and did what he wanted 2 do. 

arjun came just on time, he knew she was in danger, saved her, ill read what happened next, story getting more n more n more interesting. 

I hope after this, 
SAM stop trusting strangers quickly.
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Finally completed reading chapter 8
OKKKKK someone wrote here, arjun we doubt on him, he might come in as planned but won't harm samaira, that guess was actually right, he didn't let harm reach her so that was really cooool thing. 

Now, who is samaira's reall dad? 
her current father never loved her, now all fall in place why he did so.
her mother was pregnant b4 her marriage to samrat 
maybe she is alive and was kidnapped or killed. 

this puzzle is interesting i must say, i liked the way you connected the prologue into the story, really amazing, felt like you are an professional writer, wise person.

really great movement, this was important chapter so far, her identity his identity, too good work, well thought, liked this chapter !!

every thing was well explained well written

madhu you are so smart and wise, not easy to keep us suspended and thrilled. 

keep writing such stories, well done.!!!
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(13-03-2018, 07:21 PM)Madhumita Wrote:
(13-03-2018, 02:40 PM)sandy Wrote: Hi.
Interesting story so far, I guess we all want to know who is arjun and where is he from, what is his plan, 
Sam trusting her father so easily proves that when we love someone blindly we trust him with closed eyes, she trust arjun just because she feels safe near him but sad part of the story, those you trust the most, change you to the core, I hope that arjun won't make fun out of her. 
her mom medical report, I guess to know what happened to her and why she was gone, what made her leave.
her father sudden entry was like wao. I can't believe what I read, they were having fun, arjun ws js observing them, he is not here for simple friendship but more then that, what it is.. I wonder still. 
glad I am reading it. 
keep posting.

Thank You, Thank You for your lovely, inspiring review. I am glad that you are finding Checkmate interesting. Keep Reading. You will get to know more about Arjun.
Awesome analysis about Samaira & her relation with her father & also about Arjun.
I am really amazed how all of my readers here so keenly & minutely reading each chapters.
Keep Reading & share your precious review. Thanks again.

Thank you so much for sharing this amazing story with us here on shaanse
I'm glad you read my comments and respond as well
I will read the continuation and of course share my opinion on it
keep it up !!
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(13-03-2018, 07:26 PM)Madhumita Wrote:
(13-03-2018, 02:44 PM)sandy Wrote:
(07-03-2018, 08:16 AM)Madhumita Wrote:
(05-03-2018, 05:38 PM)sandy Wrote: Hi.
An interesting story, I saw everyone reading I decided to read too, Arjun's arrival in Sam's life was well planned, even when he entered the office, immediately noticed the employee in need of help, drew information from him and immediately logged in to learn more about this company
Why is he here?
I'll probably find out later
Neal and Sam's friendship is very fascinating, it's a shame that there are not many friends as if in reality
Very nice
I will continue to read and let you know my opinion

Welcome to "Checkmate" Thread. Everyone's reading?? Really? It's great to know.
A big Thank You for your lovely feedback.
Absolutely, your guess was right. Arjun is here definitely for some mission! To know more, Keep reading.
Great to know that you Neil Sam Friendship.
Thanks again for liking. Will wait to know your opinions.

Thanks dear Madhumita 
for such a wonderful story, I am reading slowly as time permits but as I read I can feel the story going on, the friendship, the mission, the business world, the pre plan marriage, everything is perfect.

if her dad was so good so loving so carting as she claims - he would have never married her to any drunk fellow. he does it, he has some motive behind this idea. 

what that motive is.. I guess upcoming parts will let me know. Smile Smile

Thanks for posting this story on shaanse, I do read but slow as time permits but I try giving honest review as well.


Thank You again Sandy. I am honestly satisfied to post this story here. The reviews indeed are treat to read.
Take your time & Keep reading. Hope I live up to all of your expectations.
No one motive is not clear. All are playing & all are hiding behind masks. But what game? You need to read the upcoming chapters to know.
For any confusion, any loopholes in thriller. Feel free to ask & point out.
Criticism always welcome.

Yes of course
We are glad that you shared with us in such a stunning work, yes, Sam is the most miserable woman in the whole story, because all she wanted was love from her father and her friends to engage in what she loved
Made her life complicated without her will.
life is such, we want to be happy to be simple and people make things difficult, that's life after all
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After reading part 7 I will  say- life is like that, you never know anything, someday someone your friend tomorrow he could be your biggest enemy
Sam believes her father with her eyes closed
True, she has a problem that she believes everyone, she is so innocent
She thinks everyone is good and no one will hurt her
It is not her fault, there are things that we learn from Father and there are things that are learned from Mother
Her mother wasn't in her life so she could not tell her about the dangers of life

I have a feeling that her mother is alive
Or perhaps she was murdered
But more towards the beast
Where and why
Do not know yet

So far - the question is asked at the end - where Arjun goes and why took a gun with him, how he guessed that she is in some kind of problem, seems like he was following her all the time.

Beautiful so far
I enjoyed very much
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part one of chapter 9

interesting progress, dev will never admit, i think yeah he wanted to kill sam but it has more then that, he maybe wanted to enjoy her 1st and then kill, or not kill, just kill her inner woman, by rapping her she will be broken anyway and might marry with him, what will he get by killing her, nothing
but if he rape her and then marry her, he gets it all, he is sent by samrat yes but who wants to get few money
she said no, so he wanted to rape and then she will be forced into marrying him.

good cover story for samrat, i wonder will sam agree to it and will she create issues after knowing the truth.

one last question - who brought dev to arjun's place? were they the backup team came after him or dev himself, did i miss that part?

nice progress so far  Big Grin
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part 2 of chapter 9,
this truth shake her, awake her, that rape attempt, that identity of arjun, that identity of her self, actually all this truth just shake her inside out, well hard thing when you find out you are not what you thought you are, that's a problem.

she will not trust easily even if he now tells her he has feelings, he will have 2 work hard now, won't get her love so easily, she will trust again Not a blind trust this time, maybe then, maybe then it will be a fresh start for their relationship.

so far, well written
continuing reading and will comment after.
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