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**The Big Secret** Chapter 29 Page 18 - THE ENDING
#21
(26-09-2014, 11:46 PM)Ronshan Wrote: Usually A Female Infant Often Replaced Against A Male Infant.?

Ahsan
Ye sawal samajh nai aya can u explain it please

To Pay A Money For An Exchange Of Babies Are Very Common In Society ... The Mothers Who Have Many Daughters And Give Birth To Another Daughter Pays Out For An Exchange Secretly To A Male Child ... But Male Against Male No One Trades ... Or In Some Cases If A Mother Have So Many Males And She Gives Out A Birth To Another Male She Might Exchange It With Some Relatives Requesting For It To Have A Female Exchange With Male ... ( In Our Family We Have It A Uncle Exchanged His Daughter With His Brother Son ... ) They Are Being Raised In Separate Cities & The Babies Don't Know The Secret Of Parents Too ... It Is Also Very Common ... Moreover, Some Mother Having Dead Babies May Pay To Exchange The Infant At Early Stage To Get The Live Baby For Inheritance ( Warasat Property And Land Sharing ) OR Otherwise If She Came To Learn That She Could Not Conceive Further For Another Baby In Life ... Failing For Which She Can Pay Money To Someone For A Quick Exchange ... As A Matter Of Fact, In The Infant Nursery, It's Just A Matter Of Changing The Hand Tags That Strips On The Baby's Hand Informing The Family They Belongs ... It Is A Real Story Usually Take Place In Small Local Private Clinics Or In Basic Health Units Far From Cities OR In Rural Areas ...
#22
Well said ahsan, very nice points Smile
Thnx for nice reviews, i hope u liked the idea of story
Keep on reading
#23
Thanks for reply
It was the 1st time i heard people exchanged daughter with son so its really gud to know it too
Keep on reading, u might get the answer very soon
(27-09-2014, 12:05 AM)ahsan Wrote:
(26-09-2014, 11:46 PM)Ronshan Wrote: Usually A Female Infant Often Replaced Against A Male Infant.?

Ahsan
Ye sawal samajh nai aya can u explain it please

To Pay A Money For An Exchange Of Babies Are Very Common In Society ... The Mothers Who Have Many Daughters And Give Birth To Another Daughter Pays Out For An Exchange Secretly To A Male Child ... But Male Against Male No One Trades ... Or In Some Cases If A Mother Have So Many Males And She Gives Out A Birth To Another Male She Might Exchange It To Some Relatives To Have A Female ... It Is Also very Common ... Moreover, Some Mother Having Dead Babies May Pay To Exchange The Infant At Early Stage To Get The Live Baby For Inheritance ( Warasat Property And Land Sharing ) OR Otherwise If She Came To Learn That She Could Not Conceive Further For Another Baby In Life ... Failing For Which She Can Pay Money To Someone For A Quick Exchange ... As A Matter Of Fact, In The Infant Nursery, It's Just A Matter Of Changing The Hand Tags That Strips On The Baby Hand Informing The Family They Belongs ... It Is A Real Story Usually Take Place In Small Local Private Clinics Or In Basic Health Units Far From Cities OR In Rural Areas ...
#24
(26-09-2014, 11:50 PM)ahsan Wrote:
(26-09-2014, 01:51 PM)Ronshan Wrote: Chapter 2


While all are still staring At The dying woman, Velga goes to Mike and stroked his head and hugs him and says – how nicely you grown up my boy, Mike surprised seeing her and goes away from her and says – its all rubbish, stop lying, you are not my mother, so stop saying this, its impossible, I m the son of my parents,Velga tries to come closer to him but he asks her to leave him alone and left the room.

Sima goes closer to Marta, who was sitting near her mother and asks her , how is this possible, why would someone actually switch my son?

Marta says – My mother is not lying, why would she lie just before her death ?? this was running after her all those years but she never told me her secret, I used to ask her about it but she used to say – May be one day I will tell u. Just after being ill she decided to open her heart and tell me the story of hers, She showed me her diary where she wrote all this. I m really very sorry on her behalf but today that’s what I got to say, Thank you for coming and reliving her from this big secret of hers, now I think she will die in peace.

Marta Looked at her mother and hugged her with tears and said to her, so sad that you never shared it with us and had to live with this burden on your heart all those years, but please know one thing , I will always love and respect you.

Sima says – I feel so sorry for you and can feel your pain, she hugs her and then all leave the room … leaving Marta alone with her mother.





Meanwhile – 

Mike stood near his car and did not know how to deal with this new thing,thinking to himself “how is this possible how can some woman switch a child and no one would know,, No no its not possible”  The call of his elder sister Tanya brought him out of his thoughts and he picked her call – she asked him, “What happened my bro” he told her every thing and she could not believe what she was hearing: “I m sure those people are faking it , they might want our money and that’s why they came up with such fake story that you are their son, my brother, no one would never change our relation, you are my brother and that’s the reality, come home and forget this” he heard his mother coming and ended the call. Sima and Mor came near him tried to make him relax and then his mother said – “I can not believe why would a dying woman would lie and tell such story”



Meanwhile –Goenka family came out of the hospital , David told his mom and dad, “Ill go bring the car please wait here”. 

Sima sees Velga and Eli and stopped talking. Sima went near them and said – “what are you up to ?? ah … “why you made this dying woman say such lies… tell me”

Mike joined his mother and yelled at them “don’t you feel shame on yourself to use a woman who die to tell this lies of yours, you want money ,that’s why you claim I m your son? tell tell“ 

David drove his car near them and stopped, he saw Mike yelling at his mother and when Velga tried to go closer to MIke he pushed her away, David came out of his car and said to Mike “who are you to push my mother, how dare you ?” 

Mike says – “tell her to stay away of me, got it?? How dare you people pay a dying woman or her daughter money to lie about me?, I m son of my mother so just move and let us go”

David says : “its all a lie , I m sure, you rich people must have paid for that woman so she would tell such lies, I do not know why but may be its you who actually did it” They kept arguing for a while and velga shouted “STOP IT”, “she did not lie, she is telling the truth”. 

Every one shocked to hear this and David refused to hear this and said to his mother – “Mom, please you do not need to accept what those people saying about you, I m sure it’s a lie and don’t worry you do not need to fear that man, you are my mother , come lets go from here”

Marta comes out, she sees both families arguing  and says to all, “Please stop it, why you people not believe my mother, see this diary, my mother would never lie before her death”Hearing her, None was ready to accept it, Mike took his family and drove his car away, David and his dad Eli sat in the car, Velga asked 2 minutes before they leave the place. Velga said to Marta – “I m so sorry, you had to go thru this, please forgive me for this, I know you just lost your mom and now this argues, please let me know if u need any help okay,”  

Marta says to her – “Its, okay ill manage, here is the number of that family, thank you for coming here, Thank you for letting my mom die in peace” 

Eli said to David, “Son, its taking long time, please go and check is all okay,” 

David goes out and hear the conversation of both ladies, his mother turned to him, he asked her: “Mom is this the true ??”  

She said: “Yes son it’s the truth, but please let’s go home I don’t think it’s a rite place to talk about it”

She went to the car and he stood their shocked and surprised to this new information he just got.


I knew this what will happen but often is such cases children may have some resemblance that proves something ... I mean for example if my mother raised ShaVi instead of me ... She may not look like our family member with respect to her habits resemblance and other naughty behaviors and same if I be raised by ShaVi's mother she could face a hell keeping an infant monkey at peace ... After all a monkey is a monkey and a chimpanzee is a chimpanzee although they are moth monkeys but different species different race ... If you replace a child with a child the developing figures and attitudes may refer and becomes obvious ... Anyhow lets see what comes next ...
#25
shweta , what is this ? u quoted ahsan's post
i did not get it
#26
Thank you all for your good response for the both chapters, here I m posting the 3rd chapter, hope you do read and enjoy

Chapter 3

David stood there seeing his mom entering the car but he did not move, he was Shocked, he was not ready for this, It was not that easy to hear what his mom just announced, it was not a lie, it was not something she said to end this drama, it was the reality of his life, he was not her son. 

Questions started to arise in his head… "why did she hide that from him ? why did she switch the babies ? why would a mother do such thing ? why no one ever realized that he was not their blood ? why it had to open this way ?? why why "

The touch on his shoulders brought him out of those thoughts 

"Son, What's wrong ?"

He turned back to see it was his dad Eli 

David hugged his dad with tears in his eyes, "dad, when I heard it at 1st I did not believe it, I knew that all the world can be a liar but my mom, No never, she is the one I trust the most, Why would she do it… No no it has to be a big lie"

Eli – "Son, its okay my son, please come lets go home , we shall discuss this at home, don't believe all that okay, you are our son, we raised you , we love you"… come let's go… 

David – "No, I m not going anywhere, dad,  when I heard that lady saying it , I did not believe it, I knew My mom would never do such a thing but she proved me wrong, she said to Miss marta that I was not her son, dad you both are not my parents".  After 20 seconds of silence, he quickly moved out of his dad arms and asked his daddy … "Did you know about it"???

Eli – "Son, I did not know it, there is one more thing you should know but I don't think its a rite place to discuss it, let's go,we will discuss it at home,  Ill drive, okay"

David – "one more thing, wha.."

Eli – "yes"

David follows his dad to the car, 

The travel was silent, none of them spoke much.

David kept wondering what is more to know, what is hidden from him, what's going on…."

When they got home, David went inside the house, Velga stopped Eli and said to him with tears in her eyes: "I know that one truth come out, I did not want it to come out ever, I m sorry for hiding it from you all those years, I know you would understand but I knew you would not forgive me for it, Please promise me, you will never tell our son the biggest reality of his life, please Eli I beg you, keep it hidden , let him know only the thing that he is not our son, please don't tell him the other secret, this would ruin every one's lives , please Eli I beg you, for the sake of those 20 marriage years, for our love, I beg you, please don't tell him…  for the sake of mine, I request you don't tell him anything"

Seeing her tears, Eli said: "I do not get it, why did you do it, I was there for you, I love you and still u did not trust me enough?  If you would, you would never switch the babies, more than that I can't believe it, I never doubted it, you switch the babies and never let any of us realize that both are switched, didn't you miss your real son ? tell me ?  you always called me your best friend but you never shared such a big secret with me … Now you want me to hide the other secret….

"Wait wait wait "

"What other secret………"

Keeping a silent for a bit…………..

 he got it………

""Oh…. That … Oh my God Velga, what have you done"

Velga kept begging him… "Please eli , forgive me, please don't tell our son this truth"

Eli removed her hands of him and said – "I don't know how long I can hide this truth from David, but you are wrong here Velga, you wronged with both of us"

He entered the house silently.
#27
MORE SECRETS??? Ohhh ...what could be bigger than that fact??? Lets see. next chapter soon please!
#28
secrets nai kaha jee secret kaha Smile
keep reading, sorry to keep u waiting Smile
#29
Smile
#30
KYA SIRF SMILE ... KOI COMMENT NAI SHWETA.


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